Wall for KitkatKK2 (page 17)

Red itOu figuI see you figured out yhe errors without me pointing them out good job! And thanks!

Oh yeah its coolt to be done edit away XD and ding ctually the one who asked but that was in case you were wondering not sure how it got yhere. And thanks for being the editor XDthe kids i’ll tell giru that too since she’s a“kind” at the end of it isn’t supposed to be there its supposed to be above where grace is scol if yheres an edi

That doesn’t make them sound very evil just annoying.

Yeah you can do that i HAD done spelling and grammar on my laptop but  obviously somewhere in bringing it over here it didn’t keep the edit  So yeah igo for it. Though i wanna ask why’d you ask permission i know my spelling etc isn’t great i don’t take offense to edits

Prologue posted plz leave feedback!

Really? Cool i figured she wouldn’t look like a villian she’d be more devious ya know? Oh and the prologue’s done! Getting ready to post it...oh does team luster have a  motto just curious.

What DOES Team Yell do? I hear their cheerleadery but yhat’s all i know.

Sounds good! I like the bit about the champ too

I’m picturing Alina as blonde and wearing pink, black and purple too not sure why... i like this new way of villany no elabrate weapons to destroy the wkrld  

I’ll ask the others too but i’m starting to think we need a new legened, yes a fakemon maybe a ghost/fairy or dark/fairy it’d be like “cover legends”

You can post her on my wall whenever i might actually do the prologue today the only ones in it are Grace and Meridah and it explains Grace’s choice to be a water master i actually like Teampuster i was gonna  do”Clan” but not sure how Clan Luster sounds  as good.

Ahh i wouldn’t know yhose entrys. Hatreene sounds cool “forest witch” but OWWWWW sharp  I can pull your part does not sound pleasant

(Yries to imagine a creely fairy user) also what makrs those first two creppy? Shinotic’s kinds cute i think and i don’t recall a creepy dex entry as for haternne i just don’t know anything about it.

I have no yheme ideas at all its basdd on ireland so maybe celtic names?