Wall for BM™ (page 32)

I have many questions.

"Oh, I get it. You're scared! I guess you have too much fat to fit in any guts!" -Giru Saiyan making a big mistake (albeit a somewhat funny one)

Actually it says he's twelve by the first World Martial Arts Tournament he fights in. Which means he's about fifteen by the second. Imagine him being older than me and half my height smh my head. That tiger skin though. Regardless, I still want them to be around Gohan's age, and you said he was... what, around seven by the Frieza arc? Or am I thinking of something else? If that's true, and they were about his age and introduced to him early on in the plot, that would make them small kids.

Small Giru Saiyan (she's a far bigger brat than she is tall)

As I said, it's all in all better than I expected. But of course, nitpicking.

"Over the next decade or so, they lived in the massive jungle"
...You mean these are older kids? Wow, big lame. Personally, I liked them being roughly around Gohan's age. Of course his age would depend on the point in the story, but small Gohan hanging around small Bee Saiyan and small Giru Saiyan is actually pretty amusing. The advantage to them being older is that they could, and likely would, act like little kids still, which would also be funny. But that aside, small Saiyans for the win.

OOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO sexy. what school?

spill the tea

What the heck happened to Giru Saiyan and Bee Saiyan? You've made no mention of parents. Are they dead or something? How long ago has, say, Bee Saiyan been on his own? Where are those kids, anyway? Got important backstory questions here.

rear appendage

"I named my shiny Xurkitree Xurkitree."
Autocorrect you son of a-
I meant Xurkit.

I have a shiny Buzzwole named Bee Pen if that counts. I think I named my shiny Xurkitree Xurkitree.